Adjusting the Levels in Revision
Some thoughts on novel revision and narrative mixing
I’ve had a short break from updating this newsletter, in part because, well, the state of the world. But mostly because I’ve been in the revision mines—more specifically the “first pass” mines—on my forthcoming novel, Metallic Realms. I will not ramble about that book here, but it got me thinking about the fun yet fraught process of revi…



